Archive for Martin Scorsese

Where’s Bobby?

Posted in FILM with tags , , , , on October 23, 2023 by dcairns

Robert DeNiro in a loud Hawaiian shirt makes his way through the VE Day crowd in the opening scene of Scorsese’s NEW YORK, NEW YORK (a film I feel the kids today don’t really know about).

We travel along with him, rising higher and higher. His turquoise chemise keeps him vaguely visible.

Up up up. He’s still in shot but it’s getting to be like a particularly tricky Where’s Wally?

Just when it looks like we’re going to lose sight of him completely in the festive throng —

— a helpful neon sign hoves into view and points him out.

it’s a delightful parallax illusion. In three-dimensional reality, the arrow isn’t pointing at DeNiro, but out of shot in the lower left somewhere, but in two-dimensional movie space, the devil-red arrow is aimed right at his oiled scalp.

The movie is a doomed dream — Scorsese wanted to blend Cassavetes’ psychological realism and improv with Vincente Minnelli’s stylised studio world. And I think there’s a fundamental mismatch. Musicals have to suspend their plots in order to freeze and enlarge a moment of emotion into a musical number. We can’t be worrying about the other characters while we’re enjoying a dance number, or we can enjoy a dance number while we’re worrying about the other characters.

Near the film’s end, Scorsese stages a spectacular show-stopper, an entire MGM musical condensed into one extended number. At least on my first viewing, I couldn’t get into it, much as I admired it, because I was anxious to learn what had become of DeNiro’s character (something of an SOB though he is). It didn’t bother me on repeat viewings because the question had been answered, but movie’s live or die commercially by their first-time audience’s reactions, and NYNY duly died, and that may be why. Execs eventually browbeat Scorsese into removing the number, and the film was rereleased without it and died all over again. Finally the number was reinstated.

Scorsese said he knew the film had some kind of length problem, all the scenes were necessary but if only they could have somehow combined a few…? I don’t know if it’s a length issue. Maybe it’s a tone issue. Maybe the violent, ugly emotions and the vivid colours and theatrical effects work on different, incompatible pleasure centres of the aesthetic sense. Or maybe it just needed a few more crazy touches like the above to keep the romance going in between bursts of psychological angst.

It may or may not work but I’m sure glad it exists.

Attempting to get less busy

Posted in FILM with tags , , , on October 7, 2023 by dcairns

We’d just knocked another video essay on the head, but it got up again, so we’ve knocked it on the head AGAIN.

By the end of this month I should have disposed of two more video essays and will have some viewing/blogging time, I hope. Unless another video essay job lands on my desk, which wouldn’t be bad exactly.

I’ve also been delivering a series of screenwriting lectures at Edinburgh College of Art. Here’s a sample:

Structure is considered of essential importance in a script, but there’s not a lot of agreement about what it is.

Nor do you see much curiosity in the screenwriting manuals about why structure is supposedly so important in screenplays. William Goldman says “Screenplays are structure,” a peculiarly useless dictum, and leaves it at that.

I think structure is important in all narrative forms, but more so in plays and films because they’re designed to be consumed at one sitting. A novel can be looser because you usually read it over several days, and many of the very greatest novels are very loose, in some respects.

To learn about screenwriting, I recommend first watching films with a curious and analytic mind, then reading short stories, then reading and watching plays. Sergei Eisenstein felt that movies, even long movies, are more like short stories than novels or plays. I agree with Sergei.

Most short stories are designed to be read in a single sitting. They simplify – they tend to be about ONE THING. You get to the end not long after you’ve started and so you can immediately look back on the whole thing and see if it hangs together, if it makes sense, if it contains unnecessary irrelevant material, if it produces a feeling of satisfaction.

I’m still sympathetic to filmmakers who don’t think in terms of an act structure. Scorsese is right to say that acts don’t actually exist in a film — no curtain descends after the first half hour. Films are made of sequences, he says, and you can have as many as you like. This is true. Kristin Thompson, analysing the pacing of many Hollywood movies, did however detect accelerations and decelerations roughly dividing features into four — we could call them four acts, or three with the big turning point in the middle of act two. And I think that whatever Scorsese says, he’s somewhat stuck with the fact that his films start and finish, and there’s something in the middle called the middle, which we could also call the second act.

Of course, you can disguise the shifts from one to the other, or you can ignore them, or you can highlight them.

He’s fondly quoted Roger Corman’s advice: you need a good beginning because the public wants to know what it’s all about, and you need a good ending because they want to know how it turned out. Nothing in between really matters. He calls this the best sense he ever heard in the business. It’s also very good news, because we all get lost in the second act and have to muddle our way through.

You can do this by following the truth of the characters and the logic of the story and the shape the sequences want to follow, but if you bog down, then some general principles can, I think, be helpful — a turning point in the middle to re-energize things, a sense of the doors locking at the end of the second act, wherein the characters no longer have the option of walking away from the problem and leaving it unresolved.

Anyway, this is the sort of stuff I come out with in my lectures — discussing the specific problems of a specific story always seems more helpful and less windy, but an awareness of guidelines developed by previous generations can be somewhat helpful…